The answer reports the dragon-design task in plain, direct sentences ('I had never designed anything for young children before') and ends with a simple stated lesson, typical of solid but modest Band 6.5 language.
The time I needed to use my imagination was last year, when my studio was designing a mobile app for children who are learning to read. I was asked to create a dragon character who guides the child through the story.
I needed imagination because I had never designed anything for young children before. Most of my work is for adults, with simple colours and clean lines. For this app, I had to imagine how a six-year-old sees the world, what makes them laugh, and what might frighten them instead. A dragon can look friendly or scary, and the line between the two is very thin.
It was quite difficult at first. I drew maybe twenty versions of the dragon, and most of them looked wrong somehow, too serious or too strange. My colleague Phương, who has a small son, gave me feedback after showing the drawings to him, which helped a lot.
In the end, it became easier once I stopped thinking like a designer and just tried to remember what I liked as a child myself, like cartoons on TV in Hue. The final dragon was round, orange, and a little clumsy, and the client loved it. It taught me that imagination is not only for artists, it is something you can practise.
215 words · about 2 minutes
Why this band
- LR“I had never designed anything for young children before” — "I had never designed anything for young children before" states the challenge in the plainest possible terms — common verbs, no attempt to characterise what was actually hard about it (the unfamiliar audience, the shift in visual language). That bare factual statement, accurate but undeveloped, is the Band 6.5 profile: the fact is established, but the vocabulary doesn't yet do the work of explaining why it mattered.
- GRA“A dragon can look friendly or scary, and the line between the two is very thin.” — "A dragon can look friendly or scary, and the line between the two is very thin" is two ideas joined by a single coordinating "and", with one modest descriptive clause tacked on at the end — no subordination, no relative clause doing extra work. That's accurate, correctly punctuated Band 6.5 grammar, but it's coordination rather than the embedding a 7.0 answer would more likely use, for instance turning "the line... is very thin" into a clause modifying "dragon" directly.
- FC“It taught me that imagination is not only for artists, it is something you can practise.” — The closing sentence delivers the lesson through the flat formula "it taught me that X", stating the takeaway directly without connecting it back to a specific moment from the story, such as the twenty dragon sketches or Phương's son's reaction. That direct, unembellished wrap-up is a typical Band 6.5 move — the lesson is clear, but it isn't earned through detail the way a higher-band closing would tie it back to a particular image from the story.