A plain comparative sentence and the simple statement 'How easy it was to decide is a difficult question' keep the answer correct but linguistically modest, Band 6.5 level.
The decision I want to talk about is my decision to move from Hue to Da Nang after I finished university in Hanoi, about six years ago. Instead of going back to live near my family in Hue, I chose to move alone to Da Nang and look for a job there as a UI designer.
Why I chose this was because Da Nang had more design studios and more modern companies than Hue at that time, and I wanted to work on bigger projects, like mobile apps for international clients. I also liked the idea of living near the beach and starting a life on my own.
How easy it was to decide is a difficult question. The decision itself came quite quickly, in just a few days, because I really wanted this kind of job. But it wasn't easy in my heart, because my parents worried about me living alone in a new city, and my grandmother didn't understand why I couldn't just work near home.
I'm very pleased with the result now. I found a good job at a small studio here, I've made close friends, and I really enjoy my life by the river. Every time I visit Hue, I feel proud that I made that decision by myself, even though it was hard at the beginning.
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Why this band
- GRA“Da Nang had more design studios and more modern companies than Hue at that time” — This is a straightforward comparative structure, repeating "more... than" across two parallel nouns, studios and companies, used correctly but without any additional subordination or variation layered on. It's accurate and gets the comparison across clearly, matching the mostly-simple-sentence profile expected at 6.5. The comparison also directly supports the reason given for the move, keeping the grammar tied closely to the content rather than being decorative.
- FC“How easy it was to decide is a difficult question.” — This short, plain statement directly acknowledges the complexity of the question without elaborating on it much beyond the following two sentences, which is a clear but minimal way to signal a nuanced answer is coming. At 6.5, this kind of direct topic sentence keeps the answer coherent and on-task; a 7.5 answer might instead open with a more evaluative or figurative framing. It's functional rather than stylish, doing exactly the organizational job it needs to and no more.
- LR“I'm very pleased with the result now” — "Very pleased" is plain, high-frequency vocabulary stating the outcome directly, with no more varied or specific alternative like "genuinely relieved" or "proud of how it turned out." It's accurate and appropriately positive, summing up the paragraph before the specific details of job, friends, and life by the river that follow. This kind of unembellished summary phrase is typical of 6.5, where clarity is prioritized over lexical variety.