The turning point is described plainly, in a simple time clause ('It did not need a big garden, it just needed attention and regular walks'), clear and accurate but with little further analysis.
The opinion I changed was about keeping a pet in a small apartment. For a long time, I thought it was unfair to keep a dog in a place like mine, with no balcony and not much space.
I changed this opinion about a year ago, when my friend Hà went to Hanoi for two weeks and asked me to look after her small dog. At first I said yes only because she was my friend, and I still believed it would be a bad experience.
But during those two weeks, I changed my mind completely. The dog was happy just walking with me every morning near the river and sleeping quietly in the apartment the rest of the time. It did not need a big garden, it just needed attention and regular walks, which I could easily give.
Because of this experience, I now think a small apartment is not really the problem, as long as the owner has enough time for the pet. The result is that I am now seriously thinking about getting a small dog myself, something I would never have considered before. My friends are quite surprised, because I used to argue with them about exactly this topic.
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Why this band
- GRA“I changed this opinion about a year ago, when my friend Hà went to Hanoi” — "When my friend Hà went to Hanoi" is a straightforward time clause attached to the main sentence, accurate, natural, and about as basic a form of subordination as English offers. It's the kind of correct-but-simple complexity that defines Band 6.5 grammar: enough to link two ideas together, without any further layering.
- LR“It did not need a big garden, it just needed attention and regular walks” — "It did not need a big garden, it just needed attention and regular walks" uses two parallel, plainly-worded clauses joined without a conjunction, relying entirely on everyday vocabulary to make the point. No idiom or figurative language is attempted even though the moment, realising a dog doesn't need much space, would suit one; that restraint to the plainest available words is the Band 6.5 pattern.
- FC“My friends are quite surprised” — "My friends are quite surprised" closes the answer with a short, flat observation and no follow-up on why they're surprised or how that surprise showed itself. That direct, undeveloped closing statement is typical Band 6.5 coherence — the fact is reported, but not elaborated into a fuller reflective moment.