The reasoning is stated plainly and directly ('I did not want Nam to lose his salary and then struggle with no money coming in'), giving one clear cause without further layering, typical of Band 6.5.
I want to talk about my colleague Nam, who works with me at the studio in Da Nang. Last year he told me he wanted to quit his job and become a freelance designer.
The advice I gave him was not to quit immediately. I told him to keep his job for a few more months and find one or two freelance clients first, in his free time. Only after he had some regular income from freelancing should he leave the studio completely.
I gave him this advice because I knew freelancing is not easy at the beginning. Clients can be slow to pay, and some months there is very little work. I had heard similar stories from other designers, and I did not want Nam to lose his salary and then struggle with no money coming in.
At first, Nam did not really want to hear this. He was excited and wanted to start his own business right away. He felt a little disappointed with my advice, because he thought I was being too careful. But he thought about it for a few days and decided to try my way.
He worked part-time as a freelancer for six months, and when he finally left the studio, he already had three regular clients. Now he tells everyone that patience was the right choice.
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Why this band
- GRA“I told him to keep his job for a few more months” — 'I told him to keep his job for a few more months' uses a reported-command structure with an infinitive complement, a single accurate pattern rather than one varied among several structures across the answer. This fits the Band 6.5 grammar target of correct but limited range — the sentence works, but it's the most direct way of reporting advice available.
- LR“Clients can be slow to pay” — 'Clients can be slow to pay' states a business fact plainly, using the common modal 'can be' and the everyday adjective 'slow', without reaching for more specific vocabulary such as 'unreliable payment terms' or 'cash flow gaps'. This matches the Band 6.5 lexical ceiling of everyday, high-frequency words used clearly.
- FC“he thought about it for a few days and decided to try my way” — The closing sentence reports two coordinated actions in strict chronological order — thinking about it, then deciding to try the suggestion — with no reflective comment added afterward about how things eventually turned out. Ending on plain narration rather than evaluation is typical of the Band 6.5 fluency target, in contrast to a higher-band answer that would likely add a reflective payoff line.