The 6.5 answer states its dislike directly and plainly ('I dislike this rule because design work isn't like that') with simple, comma-linked sentences describing the daily inconvenience.
The rule I would like to change is at my studio: everyone must clock in by eight o'clock every morning, even though we're a creative company and don't really need fixed hours.
I think the reason for the rule is simply that our manager, Mai, wants to make sure everyone is working the same hours and nobody is being lazy. It probably also makes it easier to organise meetings if everyone arrives around the same time.
I dislike this rule because design work isn't like that. Some mornings I have good ideas early, other mornings I work much better late at night, but I still have to be at my desk by eight, tired and not really productive until later. I also live quite close to the river, and the roads are terrible at eight o'clock, so I waste time sitting in traffic for no real reason.
I would like to change the rule so that we just need to complete eight hours sometime between six in the morning and eight at night, rather than starting at a fixed time. I think people would actually work better and feel less tired. I've mentioned this to Mai a few times, but nothing has changed yet.
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Why this band
- FC“I dislike this rule because design work isn't like that.” — The reason is stated in one plain because-clause and then left to stand on its own, with no example or elaboration folded into the same sentence — a single, direct assertion is exactly the "one clear reason is enough" level of development Band 6.5 asks for. A 7.0 answer would typically follow this same reason immediately with a concrete instance (the way this speaker later does with the traffic complaint); here the reason is stated but not yet illustrated, which keeps the sentence plain rather than developed.
- LR“I waste time sitting in traffic for no real reason.” — "Waste time" is about as basic as this idea can be phrased — a high-frequency verb plus a high-frequency noun, with no more vivid alternative like "stuck in gridlock" or "crawl through traffic" attempted. That's squarely Band 6.5 Lexical Resource: everyday words used clearly, with no reach for a livelier synonym even though the traffic complaint is a natural moment for one. It still communicates the frustration perfectly well, which is the point — plain doesn't mean unclear, just unambitious.
- GRA“Some mornings I have good ideas early, other mornings I work much better late at night, but I still have to be at my desk by eight, tired and not really productive until later.” — The sentence is long, but its length comes from stringing clauses together with commas and "but" rather than from real subordination — "some mornings... other mornings... but I still have to..." is coordination stretched out, not embedding. That's the Band 6.5 grammar profile: accurate and fluent at sentence length, but structurally simple underneath. A 7.0 version would likely convert one of these comma-joined clauses into a true subordinate clause with "although" or a relative pronoun instead of relying on "but" to carry the whole contrast.