The answer gives one plain reason for wanting to go and describes the office with simple, everyday adjectives, correct but modest — squarely Band 6.5.
The place I would like to work in for a short time is Seoul, in South Korea. I know about it mainly through my colleague Quân, who worked with a Korean client on a mobile app project last year and had video calls with their design team almost every week.
From what Quân told me, and from photos he showed me, their office looked really modern, with lots of glass and very organised desks, quite different from our office in Da Nang. He said the designers there work very fast and give feedback in a clear, direct way, which he found useful.
The work I would like to do there is the same kind of work I do now, which is UI design for mobile apps, but inside a Korean studio instead of just talking to them online. I think seeing how they plan and organise their projects would teach me a lot.
I would only want to go for a short time, maybe two or three months, because my family and my whole life are here in Da Nang, and I wouldn't want to move away permanently. But a few months would be long enough to learn new working habits, try some Korean food every day, and bring some new ideas back to my own studio afterwards.
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Why this band
- LR“really modern, with lots of glass and very organised desks” — The description relies on three everyday adjectives and nouns — "modern," "glass," "organised" — with the intensifiers "really" and "very" doing the work instead of any more specific vocabulary like "sleek" or "minimalist." This is accurate, visual, and easy to follow, which is all 6.5 requires, but it never reaches for the one slightly less-common word that would nudge it toward 7.0. It also directly supports the comparison the speaker draws two sentences later with their own office in Da Nang.
- FC“I think seeing how they plan and organise their projects would teach me a lot.” — This gives one clear, generalized reason for wanting the placement — learning their planning process — and stops there rather than adding a second reason or a concrete example of what that learning might look like. At 6.5, a single reason delivered plainly is sufficient development; a 7.0 answer would likely follow it with a specific instance, such as how they run a kickoff meeting. The vagueness of "teach me a lot" compared with a more pointed 7.5-style claim is itself a marker of this band.
- GRA“I would only want to go for a short time, maybe two or three months, because my family and my whole life are here in Da Nang” — This is a because-clause attached plainly to the main clause, used correctly to explain motivation but not varied with any other clause type in the same sentence. A 7.0 speaker might combine it with a second subordinate idea, such as "even though I'd learn a lot, because...," whereas this answer keeps the reasoning to one clean cause-and-effect link. It reflects the overall pattern of the answer, where each paragraph gives one straightforward justification rather than layering several.