The answer gives one plain reason to like the house and one plain reason not to live there, using simple, high-frequency vocabulary throughout ('so clean', 'a bit scary'), typical of Band 6.5.
The home I want to talk about belongs to my friend Quân, whose family has a house on Son Tra Peninsula, not far from Da Nang. I visited it last summer, when he invited a few of us from university days for a weekend barbecue.
Quân lives there with his parents, in a house surrounded by a garden with fruit trees, right at the bottom of the mountain, close to the forest.
Why I liked it is easy to explain. The air felt so clean compared to the city, and it was very quiet, with only birds and sometimes monkeys in the trees nearby. The house is simple but has a big open terrace where we sat and looked at the sea in the distance. It felt like a mini holiday, even though we only drove twenty minutes from my apartment.
Why I wouldn't want to live there is mainly because it's far from everything I need. The nearest shop is a fifteen-minute ride away, and there's no coffee shop or restaurant nearby. Quân said monkeys sometimes come down and steal food from the kitchen if the door is open, which sounds a bit scary to me. In typhoon season, the road can also be dangerous with falling branches. So it's a lovely place to visit, but I need my noisy, convenient city life more than I realised.
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Why this band
- LR“The air felt so clean compared to the city” — This uses simple, everyday vocabulary — "clean," "compared to" — to make a clear comparison without reaching for a more specific or sensory word like "fresh" or "unpolluted." It's accurate and easy to picture, matching the 6.5 target of plain, high-frequency description. It also sets up the general "why I liked it" reasoning that follows, staying at the same level of plainness as the rest of that paragraph.
- GRA“It felt like a mini holiday, even though we only drove twenty minutes from my apartment.” — This is a basic complex sentence built with "even though," correctly signalling a contrast between the short travel time and the strong holiday feeling, but it's the only subordinating structure used and isn't combined with anything else. It's accurate and communicates the contrast clearly, which is what 6.5 grammar requires without further elaboration. The specific detail of "twenty minutes" also grounds an otherwise vague feeling, "mini holiday," in something concrete.
- FC“So it's a lovely place to visit, but I need my noisy, convenient city life more than I realised.” — This single sentence sums up the whole answer's conclusion plainly, contrasting "lovely to visit" with "need my city life," without further unpacking what specifically about convenience matters most. At 6.5, this kind of direct, tidy closing statement is sufficient; a 7.5 answer might instead end on a more specific or figurative image. It does effectively balance the earlier praise of the house with the reasons for not wanting to live there, even if briefly.