The answer states hopes plainly ('I think together we could build something quite good') using a vague intensifier and a single unsubordinated negative sentence, which keeps it clear but linguistically simple.
The family member I'd like to work with in the future is my younger sister, Linh. She's studying business in Ho Chi Minh City at the moment.
We haven't really worked together before, apart from small things like helping our parents during Tết, cleaning the house and cooking together. We've never done anything like a real job together.
What I'd like to do with her is open a small online shop, maybe selling clothes or accessories on Shopee. I'm a designer, so I could make the logo, the packaging and the photos look nice, and she's very good with numbers and talking to customers, so she could manage the orders and the money side. I think together we could build something quite good.
The reason I want to work with her is that we trust each other completely, and we both grew up watching our parents run a small business at home, so I think we understand how much effort it takes. Also, we don't get to spend much time together now because she lives so far away, so working on a small project together would be a nice way to stay close, not just talk on Zalo once a week.
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Why this band
- FC“I think together we could build something quite good.” — This sentence states a hope directly, using the vague hedge "quite good" instead of specifying what success might actually look like, and it closes the paragraph without linking forward to the reasons that follow. That flat, unelaborated closing is characteristic of Band 6.5 coherence — clear and understandable, but a Band 7.0 answer would more likely specify what "good" means or connect it explicitly to the skills described just before it.
- LR“quite good” — "Quite good" pairs a common intensifier with one of the most general positive adjectives in English, leaving the actual quality of the imagined business entirely unspecified. A Band 7.0 answer would likely replace this with something more concrete or collocational (e.g. "a solid little side business"), but at Band 6.5 this kind of safe, all-purpose phrase is exactly the plain, low-risk vocabulary the tier is built around, keeping the sentence clear even though it says very little.
- GRA“We've never done anything like a real job together.” — The sentence is a single negative statement with no subordinate clause attached — no "because," no "even though," nothing explaining or qualifying the claim. A Band 7.0 answer might attach a reason or consequence here (e.g. "because we've always lived in different cities"), but on its own this unembellished negative sentence demonstrates the limited structural range that defines Band 6.5 grammar.