The pie chart below shows the different methods used to manage municipal solid waste in the city of Da Nang in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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• TR“Overall, landfill was clearly the most common method of managing the city's waste, while chemical and hazardous treatment was the least common method.” — Identifies the highest and lowest categories like the 7.5 answer, but with repeated wording ("method... method") instead of varied vocabulary.如同7.5分范文一样指出了占比最高和最低的类别，但重复使用 "method" 一词，而非采用多样化的词汇。
• LR“Together, these three methods accounted for most of the total waste produced in the city.” — A safe, correct summarising phrase, but far less precise than the 7.5 answer's "responsible for over three-quarters".这是一个安全且正确的总结性表达，但远不如7.5分范文中的 "responsible for over three-quarters" 精确。
• GRA“Composting made up 11% of the waste, which was more than exporting for recycling abroad (5%) and chemical and hazardous treatment, which was the smallest method of all at only 3%.” — Two "which" relative clauses are strung together correctly but repetitively, rather than the varied comparative-plus-relative structure of the 7.5 answer.两个 "which" 定语从句被正确但重复地串联在一起，而非像7.5分范文那样采用比较结构与定语从句相结合的多样化写法。
• CC“The other three methods played a much smaller role.” — A functional pivot sentence, but shorter and less elaborated than the 7.5 answer's "By contrast, the remaining methods played a considerably smaller role."这是一个功能性的过渡句，但比7.5分范文中的 "By contrast, the remaining methods played a considerably smaller role." 更简短、阐述不足。

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• TR“Overall, landfill disposal was by far the most widely used method of handling the city's waste, whereas chemical and hazardous treatment made up the smallest proportion.” — Names the highest and lowest categories in one balanced sentence, matching the 7.5 answer's overview strategy closely.在一个平衡的句子中同时点出了占比最高和最低的类别，与7.5分范文的总览策略非常接近。
• LR“these three methods were responsible for more than three-quarters of all waste processed in the city” — Aggregates several figures with a natural summarising phrase, close to the 7.5 answer's "Combined... responsible for" but slightly less economically phrased.用自然的总结性表达汇总了多个数值，接近7.5分范文的 "Combined... responsible for"，但表达略欠精炼。
• GRA“Composting accounted for 11% of waste, somewhat more than exporting for recycling abroad, which made up 5%, and chemical and hazardous treatment, the least common method overall at just 3%.” — Strings a comparative clause and an appositive together to cover three figures in one sentence — ambitious, though slightly less tightly controlled than the 7.5 answer's version.将比较分句与同位语结构串联在一起，在一句话中涵盖了三个数据点——颇具野心，但把控力略逊于7.5分范文的写法。
• CC“The remaining three methods, however, played a considerably smaller part in the overall system.” — A clear pivot sentence separating major from minor methods, functionally equivalent to the 7.5 answer's transition but with a slightly less economical "however" insertion.这是一个清晰的过渡句，将主要方法与次要方法区分开来，功能上等同于7.5分范文的过渡句，只是插入的 "however" 略欠简练。

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• TR“Overall, landfill disposal stood out as the dominant method for handling the city's waste, whereas chemical and hazardous treatment accounted for the smallest proportion.” — Identifies the highest and lowest categories in the pie chart in one balanced sentence, exactly what an overview needs.在一个平衡的句子中同时指出了饼图中占比最高和最低的类别，正是总览句所需要的写法。
• LR“Combined, these three methods were responsible for over three-quarters of all waste management activities in the city.” — The summarising phrase "Combined... responsible for" is a natural way to aggregate several figures without simply adding numbers mechanically.总结性表达 "Combined... responsible for" 自然地将多个数值汇总，而非机械地简单相加。
• GRA“Composting was used for 11% of the waste, a figure noticeably higher than exporting for recycling abroad, which accounted for 5%” — A comparative structure ("noticeably higher than") combined with a relative clause links three data points inside one sentence.比较结构 "noticeably higher than" 与定语从句结合，在一个句子内串联了三个数据点。
• CC“By contrast, the remaining methods played a considerably smaller role.” — A clear pivot sentence that separates the three major methods (previous paragraph) from the three minor ones described next.清晰的过渡句，将三种主要方式（前一段）与接下来描述的三种次要方式区分开来。
• TR“chemical and hazardous treatment, the least common method at just 3%” — Closes the report by confirming the smallest category named in the overview, giving the essay a well-rounded structure.以确认总览句中提到的最小类别收尾，使全文结构首尾呼应、完整均衡。