The chart below illustrates the percentage of the population who accessed the internet via smartphone in three different Vietnamese regions between 2013 and 2023. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

下图展示了2013年至2023年间，三个越南地区通过智能手机接入互联网的人口比例。请概括信息，选择并报告主要特征，并在相关之处进行比较。

Smartphone Internet Access in Selected Vietnamese Regions (2013-2023)
Smartphone Internet Access in Selected Vietnamese Regions (2013-2023) (%)

The line graph tracks the share of residents with smartphone internet access from 2013 to 2023 in Ho Chi Minh City, Đồng Tháp (Mekong Delta), and Đắk Lắk (Central Highlands), with Ho Chi Minh City consistently highest and Đắk Lắk consistently lowest.该折线图追踪了2013年至2023年间胡志明市、同塔省（湄公河三角洲）和多乐省（西原地区）居民通过智能手机接入互联网的比例，胡志明市始终最高，多乐省始终最低。

6.5 分

This 6.5 answer reports the correct start and end figures for all three regions and the consistent ranking, but skips the 2017 midpoint comparison the 7.5 answer uses, and leans on plain phrasing ("grew a lot", "almost everyone") instead of precise collocations.这篇6.5分范文准确报告了三个地区的起止数值以及一致的排名，但省略了7.5分范文中使用的2017年中期数据对比，并且依赖平实的措辞（"grew a lot"、"almost everyone"）而非精确的搭配。

The line graph shows the percentage of people who used smartphones to access the internet in three areas of Vietnam: Ho Chi Minh City, Đồng Tháp, and Đắk Lắk, from 2013 to 2023. Overall, the percentage went up in all three places, and Ho Chi Minh City always had the highest number while Đắk Lắk always had the lowest.这张折线图展示了越南三个地区——胡志明市、同塔省和多乐省——在2013年至2023年间使用智能手机上网的人口比例。总体来看，三个地区的比例都在上升，其中胡志明市始终最高，多乐省始终最低。

In 2013, 35% of people in Ho Chi Minh City used smartphones to access the internet. This number grew every year and reached 96% in 2023, which is almost everyone. Đồng Tháp and Đắk Lắk started much lower, at 14% and 9%, but they also grew a lot.2013年，胡志明市有35%的人使用智能手机上网。这一数字逐年增长，到2023年达到96%，几乎覆盖了所有人。同塔省和多乐省的起点则低得多，分别为14%和9%，但它们也大幅增长。

By 2023, 78% of people in Đồng Tháp had smartphone internet access, and in Đắk Lắk the number reached 68%. Although both places grew quickly, they never became as high as Ho Chi Minh City during the whole period.到2023年，同塔省的智能手机上网人口比例达到78%，多乐省则达到68%。尽管两地增长迅速，但在整个时期内都未能赶上胡志明市的水平。

搭配词汇

went up in all three places · 三个地区都在上升always had the highest number · 始终最高grew every year · 逐年增长started much lower · 起点低得多grew quickly · 增长迅速

考官点评

  • TR“Overall, the percentage went up in all three places, and Ho Chi Minh City always had the highest number while Đắk Lắk always had the lowest.” — Covers the shared trend and the ranking, meeting the basic overview requirement, though in plainer wording than "consistently recording the highest percentages".涵盖了共同趋势和排名，满足了总览句的基本要求，但措辞比 "consistently recording the highest percentages" 更为平实。
  • LR“which is almost everyone” — This phrase is a simple, everyday paraphrase for a figure near 100%, functional but far less precise than a collocation like "near-saturation point".这是对接近100%数值的一种简单日常化释义，虽然可行，但远不如 "near-saturation point" 这样的搭配精准。
  • CC“Although both places grew quickly, they never became as high as Ho Chi Minh City during the whole period.” — The concessive "Although" links the two supporting regions back to the leading region, but the paragraph otherwise relies on repeated "and"/"but" connectors rather than varied linking devices.让步连词 "Although" 将两个次要地区与领先地区联系起来，但段落其余部分仍主要依赖反复使用的 "and"/"but"，而非多样化的衔接手段。
  • GRA“Đồng Tháp and Đắk Lắk started much lower, at 14% and 9%, but they also grew a lot.” — Grammatically accurate but structurally simple — a short coordinate clause rather than the embedded subordinate clauses used at higher bands.语法准确但结构简单——使用的是简短的并列分句，而非高分答案中嵌入式的从属分句。
7.0 分

This 7.0 answer adds the 2017 midpoint comparison and a steadier collocational range ("expanded rapidly", "close to full coverage") than the 6.5 version, but its topic sentences are less sharply time-signposted than the 7.5 answer's explicit "latter half of the period" structure.这篇7.0分范文加入了2017年中期数据的对比，并使用了比6.5分范文更稳定丰富的搭配（"expanded rapidly"、"close to full coverage"），但其主题句在时间标示上不如7.5分范文明确的 "latter half of the period" 结构清晰。

The line graph illustrates the proportion of the population with smartphone internet access in three Vietnamese regions — Ho Chi Minh City, Đồng Tháp, and Đắk Lắk — between 2013 and 2023. Overall, all three regions experienced substantial growth in smartphone internet access over the period, with Ho Chi Minh City consistently ahead of the other two and Đắk Lắk remaining behind throughout.这张折线图展示了越南三个地区——胡志明市、同塔省和多乐省——在2013年至2023年间智能手机上网人口比例的变化。总体来看，三个地区在此期间都经历了大幅增长，其中胡志明市始终领先于其他两个地区，而多乐省则始终落后。

Ho Chi Minh City had the highest figure at every point, rising from 35% in 2013 to 66% in 2017 and eventually reaching 96% by 2023, close to full coverage. Đồng Tháp and Đắk Lắk began much further behind, at 14% and 9% respectively, though both also expanded rapidly over the following years.胡志明市的数值在各个时间点都最高，从2013年的35%上升到2017年的66%，最终在2023年达到96%，近乎全面普及。同塔省和多乐省的起点则低得多，分别为14%和9%，但此后几年两地也都迅速扩张。

By 2017, Đồng Tháp's figure had climbed to 38%, compared with 28% in Đắk Lắk, and this gap between the two regions remained fairly steady afterwards. Đồng Tháp finished the period at 78%, while Đắk Lắk reached 68% in 2023, meaning that despite rapid growth, neither region ever caught up with Ho Chi Minh City.到2017年，同塔省的数值已攀升至38%，而多乐省为28%，此后两地之间的差距大体保持稳定。同塔省在期末达到78%，多乐省在2023年达到68%，这意味着尽管增长迅速，两地始终未能赶上胡志明市。

搭配词汇

experienced substantial growth · 经历了大幅增长consistently ahead of · 始终领先于close to full coverage · 近乎全面普及expanded rapidly · 迅速扩张remained fairly steady · 大体保持稳定caught up with · 赶上

考官点评

  • TR“Overall, all three regions experienced substantial growth in smartphone internet access over the period, with Ho Chi Minh City consistently ahead of the other two and Đắk Lắk remaining behind throughout.” — A well-formed two-part overview naming both the shared trend and the ranking, close in function to the 7.5 overview but using slightly less varied vocabulary ("ahead of"/"behind" rather than "recording the highest"/"remaining the lowest").结构完整的两部分总览句，同时点明了共同趋势和排名，功能上接近7.5分范文的总览句，但用词的多样性略逊一筹（用 "ahead of"/"behind" 而非 "recording the highest"/"remaining the lowest"）。
  • LR“close to full coverage” — A reasonable near-100% paraphrase, though less idiomatic and precise than the 7.5 answer's "near-saturation point".对接近100%数值的合理释义，但不如7.5分范文中的 "near-saturation point" 地道和精确。
  • GRA“though both also expanded rapidly over the following years” — A concessive "though" clause links two ideas within one sentence, showing controlled subordination, though less densely packed than the embedded "while" clause in the 7.5 answer.让步状语从句 "though" 在一句话中连接了两个信息点，展示了良好的从属结构掌控力，但不如7.5分范文中嵌入的 "while" 从句那样信息密度高。
  • CC“By 2017, Đồng Tháp's figure had climbed to 38%, compared with 28% in Đắk Lắk, and this gap between the two regions remained fairly steady afterwards.” — Introduces a specific comparison point and links forward to the final paragraph's closing figures, giving reasonable cohesion, though the paragraph break is less sharply signposted than the 7.5 answer's dedicated "latter half" topic sentence.引入了一个具体的对比时间点，并与末段的收尾数据相衔接，具备合理的连贯性，但段落分界不如7.5分范文中专门以 "latter half" 开头的主题句那样清晰。
7.5 分

The 7.5 answer's distinguishing move is its explicit two-stage time structure (early period, then "the latter half of the period") combined with the interpretive collocation "near-saturation point", giving the data a shape neither lower band organises as clearly.7.5分范文的突出手法在于其明确的两段式时间结构（前期，再到 "the latter half of the period"），并结合了具有解释性的搭配 "near-saturation point"，为数据赋予了两个较低分数段答案都未能如此清晰组织的结构。

The line graph illustrates the proportion of residents in Ho Chi Minh City, Đồng Tháp, and Đắk Lắk who accessed the internet via smartphone over an eleven-year period, from 2013 to 2023.该折线图展示了2013年至2023年这十一年间，胡志明市、同塔省和多乐省居民通过智能手机接入互联网的比例。

Overall, smartphone internet access saw a significant increase across all three regions throughout the period, with Ho Chi Minh City consistently recording the highest percentages and Đắk Lắk remaining the lowest.总体而言，在整个时期内，这三个地区通过智能手机接入互联网的比例均显著增加，胡志明市始终保持最高比例，而多乐省则始终最低。

In 2013, Ho Chi Minh City led the way with 35% of its population having smartphone internet access, a figure that steadily climbed to reach a near-saturation point of 96% by 2023. Đồng Tháp and Đắk Lắk, while starting much lower at 14% and 9% respectively, also experienced substantial growth. By 2017, smartphone internet penetration in Đồng Tháp had increased to 38%, while Đắk Lắk's figure reached 28%.2013年，胡志明市以35%的智能手机互联网接入率领先，这一数字稳步上升，到2023年接近饱和点，达到96%。同塔省和多乐省起步较低，分别为14%和9%，但也经历了显著增长。到2017年，同塔省的智能手机互联网普及率已增至38%，而多乐省的数字达到28%。

The latter half of the period saw continued expansion for both Đồng Tháp and Đắk Lắk. Đồng Tháp's smartphone-connected population rose to 66% by 2021 and concluded the period at 78% in 2023. Similarly, Đắk Lắk's proportion of smartphone internet users reached 55% in 2021, finishing at 68% a decade after the initial measurement, demonstrating a consistent upward trajectory for all three regions over the entire timeframe.该时期的后半段，同塔省和多乐省的增长持续。到2021年，同塔省的智能手机联网人口上升到66%，并在2023年结束时达到78%。同样，多乐省的智能手机互联网用户比例在2021年达到55%，在初始测量十年后以68%结束，显示出这三个地区在整个时间段内的一致上升趋势。

搭配词汇

line graph illustrates · 折线图展示saw a significant increase · 经历显著增长consistently recording the highest · 持续保持最高led the way · 引领潮流steadily climbed · 稳步上升near-saturation point · 接近饱和点experienced substantial growth · 经历大幅增长consistent upward trajectory · 持续上升趋势

考官点评

  • TR“Overall, smartphone internet access saw a significant increase across all three regions throughout the period, with Ho Chi Minh City consistently recording the highest percentages and Đắk Lắk remaining the lowest.” — A two-part overview that identifies both the shared trend and the ranking between regions, exactly what a Task 1 summary requires.分两部分总结，既指出共同趋势又指出地区排名，正是第一部分总览句所需要的写法。
  • LR“a near-saturation point of 96%” — The collocation "near-saturation point" is a precise, idiomatic way to describe a figure approaching 100% without simply repeating the number."near-saturation point" 这一搭配精准而地道地描述了接近100%的数值，而不是单纯重复数字。
  • GRA“Đồng Tháp and Đắk Lắk, while starting much lower at 14% and 9% respectively, also experienced substantial growth.” — A participial "while" clause is embedded mid-sentence to compress two ideas — starting point and growth — into one complex structure.在句中嵌入 "while" 状语从句，将起始点和增长两个信息压缩进一个复合句结构中。
  • CC“The latter half of the period saw continued expansion for both Đồng Tháp and Đắk Lắk.” — This topic sentence signals a clear time-based paragraph boundary, cohesively dividing the report into two halves of the timeframe.该主题句明确标示了以时间为界的段落分界，将报告清晰地划分为前后两个时间段。
  • TR“Đắk Lắk's proportion of smartphone internet users reached 55% in 2021, finishing at 68% a decade after the initial measurement” — Closes the data report by tying the final figure back to the starting year, reinforcing accurate, selective coverage of the full timeframe.以最终数值呼应起始年份收束报告，体现了对整个时间跨度准确且有选择性的覆盖。