The diagram below illustrates the stages involved in the production of recycled glass bottles at a recycling facility in Vietnam. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

下图展示了在越南一家回收工厂生产回收玻璃瓶所涉及的各个阶段。请总结信息，选择并报告主要特征，并在相关之处进行比较。

Recycled Glass Bottle Manufacturing Process (Vietnam)
Recycled Glass Bottle Manufacturing Process (Vietnam)

Data note: the process shown is generic to glass recycling worldwide; it is set at a facility in Vietnam for context, reflecting the country's growing domestic glass-recycling industry.数据说明：图中所示流程是全球玻璃回收行业的通用流程；为增添背景信息，本练习将场景设定在越南一家工厂，以反映该国国内玻璃回收产业不断发展的现状。

6.5 分

This 6.5 answer names every stage correctly but uses only everyday vocabulary ('remove dirt', 'cooling stage') and a simple 'because' clause, missing the technical term 'cullet' and the denser appositive-plus-relative-clause sentence the 7.5 answer builds around the annealing stage.这篇6.5范文准确列出了每个阶段，但只使用了日常词汇（“remove dirt”、“cooling stage”）和简单的 “because” 从句，缺少7.5范文中提到的专业术语 “cullet”，以及围绕退火阶段构建的更密集的同位语加定语从句句式。

The diagram shows how used glass bottles are collected and turned into new glass bottles at a recycling factory in Vietnam.该图展示了在越南一家回收工厂中，废旧玻璃瓶如何被收集并转化为新玻璃瓶。

Overall, this is a linear process with six stages. It starts with collecting used glass and ends with the finished bottles being checked and packaged for shops.总体来看，这是一个包含六个阶段的线性流程。它从收集废旧玻璃开始，到成品瓶子经检查并包装以供商店销售时结束。

First, used glass bottles are collected from homes and businesses. After that, the glass is sorted and cleaned to remove dirt, and it is also separated by colour. This step is important because clean glass is needed for the next stage. Next, the clean glass is crushed into small pieces and then melted at a high temperature in a furnace.首先，废旧玻璃瓶从家庭和企业中被收集起来。之后，玻璃被分拣和清洗以去除污渍，同时也会按颜色分类。这一步很重要，因为下一阶段需要用到干净的玻璃。接着，干净的玻璃被粉碎成小块，然后在熔炉中以高温熔化。

Then, the melted glass is poured into moulds and shaped into new bottles. After this, the bottles go through a cooling stage, which is also called annealing, to make the glass stronger and safer. Finally, the bottles are checked for quality and packaged, ready to be sent to shops and other businesses.然后，熔化的玻璃被倒入模具中并塑造成新瓶子。之后，瓶子会经过一个冷却阶段，这一阶段也被称为退火，目的是让玻璃更坚固、更安全。最后，瓶子经过质量检查并被包装，准备送往商店和其他企业。

搭配词汇

linear process · 线性流程sorted and cleaned · 被分拣和清洗separated by colour · 按颜色分类crushed into small pieces · 被粉碎成小块cooling stage · 冷却阶段checked for quality and packaged · 经过质量检查并被包装

考官点评

  • TR“Overall, this is a linear process with six stages. It starts with collecting used glass and ends with the finished bottles being checked and packaged for shops.” — Correctly frames the whole process by its start and end points, though in simpler wording than the 7.5 answer's overview.准确地以流程的起点和终点来概括整个流程，但措辞比7.5范文的总览句更简单。
  • LR“the glass is sorted and cleaned to remove dirt, and it is also separated by colour” — Accurate but everyday vocabulary ("remove dirt") that does not reach the technical precision of the 7.5 answer's term "cullet".“remove dirt” 这类日常词汇准确但较为普通，未达到7.5范文中 “cullet” 这一专业术语的精准度。
  • GRA“This step is important because clean glass is needed for the next stage.” — A simple "because" clause with a passive verb is correct but structurally much plainer than the 7.5 answer's appositive-plus-relative-clause sentence.带被动动词的简单 “because” 从句语法正确，但结构上比7.5范文中同位语加定语从句的句子简单得多。
  • CC“After this, the bottles go through a cooling stage, which is also called annealing, to make the glass stronger and safer.” — The basic linker "After this" combined with a simple relative clause explains the technical term but with less cohesive density than the 7.5 answer's version.基本连接词 “After this” 配合简单定语从句解释了专业术语，但连贯密度不及7.5范文的版本。
  • TR“Finally, the bottles are checked for quality and packaged, ready to be sent to shops and other businesses.” — Correctly closes the description at the diagram's final stage, matching the overview's stated endpoint.准确地在图表最后一个阶段结束描述，与总览句所述的终点一致。
7.0 分

This 7.0 answer upgrades the vocabulary with phrases like 'impurities are removed' and uses a reduced clause ('Once cleaned...') for subordination, but it still stops short of the 7.5 answer's technical term 'cullet' and its single tightly packed appositive-and-relative-clause sentence.这篇7.0范文用 “impurities are removed” 等短语升级了词汇，并用省略从句（“Once cleaned...”）实现了从句结构，但仍未达到7.5范文中的专业术语 “cullet” 以及那句紧凑的同位语加定语从句句式。

The diagram illustrates how used glass bottles are collected and processed into new glass bottles at a recycling facility in Vietnam, covering six distinct stages.该图展示了在越南一家回收设施中，废旧玻璃瓶如何被收集并加工成新玻璃瓶，涵盖六个不同的阶段。

Overall, this is a linear process made up of six stages, beginning with the collection of used glass and concluding with finished bottles that have been checked and packaged for distribution.总体来看，这是一个由六个阶段构成的线性流程，从收集废旧玻璃开始，到成品瓶子经检查并包装以供分销时结束。

In the first stage, used glass bottles are collected from households and businesses, providing the raw material for recycling. This glass then goes through a sorting and cleaning stage, during which impurities are removed and the glass is separated by colour. Once cleaned, the glass is crushed into small fragments before being melted at high temperatures in a furnace.在第一阶段，废旧玻璃瓶从家庭和企业中被收集起来，为回收过程提供原材料。这些玻璃随后进入分拣和清洗阶段，在此期间杂质被去除，玻璃按颜色被分开。清洗完成后，玻璃被粉碎成小碎片，然后在熔炉中以高温熔化。

The molten glass is then poured into moulds and shaped into new bottles. These bottles subsequently pass through a cooling and annealing stage, which strengthens the glass and reduces the risk of breakage before it reaches customers. Finally, the bottles undergo quality checks and are packaged, ready for distribution to shops and other businesses across the country.熔融的玻璃随后被倒入模具中并塑造成新瓶子。这些瓶子随后经过冷却和退火阶段，这一阶段能增强玻璃强度，降低瓶子在送达顾客手中之前破裂的风险。最后，瓶子经过质量检查并被包装，准备分销至全国各地的商店和其他企业。

搭配词汇

raw material for recycling · 回收的原材料impurities are removed · 杂质被去除separated by colour · 按颜色分开crushed into small fragments · 被粉碎成小碎片melted at high temperatures · 在高温下熔化cooling and annealing stage · 冷却和退火阶段

考官点评

  • TR“Overall, this is a linear process made up of six stages, beginning with the collection of used glass and concluding with finished bottles that have been checked and packaged for distribution.” — A strong overview sentence framing the six-stage process by its start and end points, close to the 7.5 answer's model.一个有力的总览句，以首尾两端概括了六阶段流程，接近7.5范文的写法。
  • LR“This glass then goes through a sorting and cleaning stage, during which impurities are removed and the glass is separated by colour.” — "Impurities are removed" is more precise than the 6.5 answer's "remove dirt", though it still falls short of the 7.5 answer's technical term "cullet".“impurities are removed” 比6.5范文中的 “remove dirt” 更精准，但仍不及7.5范文中的专业术语 “cullet”。
  • GRA“Once cleaned, the glass is crushed into small fragments before being melted at high temperatures in a furnace.” — The reduced clause "Once cleaned" plus a passive "before being melted" shows controlled subordination, a step up from the 6.5 answer's simple sentences.省略从句 “Once cleaned” 加上被动结构 “before being melted” 展现了有控制的从句运用，比6.5范文的简单句更进一步。
  • CC“These bottles subsequently pass through a cooling and annealing stage, which strengthens the glass and reduces the risk of breakage before it reaches customers.” — "Subsequently" is a more formal cohesive marker than the 6.5 answer's "After this", and the relative clause adds detail without breaking the sentence flow.“Subsequently” 是比6.5范文中 “After this” 更正式的衔接词，其后的定语从句在不打断句子流畅度的情况下补充了细节。
  • TR“Finally, the bottles undergo quality checks and are packaged, ready for distribution to shops and other businesses across the country.” — Correctly closes the report at the diagram's final stage, matching the endpoint stated in the overview.准确地在图表最后一个阶段收尾，与总览句中所述的终点相符。
7.5 分

This 7.5 answer stands out for introducing the precise technical term 'cullet' instead of a vague paraphrase, and for packing an appositive noun phrase plus a relative clause with two coordinated verbs into a single sentence describing the annealing stage.这篇7.5范文的突出之处在于引入了精准的专业术语 “cullet”，而非模糊的改述，并在描述退火阶段的一句话中，将同位语名词短语与带两个并列动词的定语从句结合在一起。

The diagram illustrates the six main stages involved in producing new glass bottles from recycled materials at a recycling facility in Vietnam.该图展示了在越南一家回收工厂利用回收材料生产新玻璃瓶所涉及的六个主要阶段。

Overall, the process begins with the collection of discarded glass and ends with finished bottles that have been quality-checked and packaged, ready for distribution to retailers.总体而言，整个流程始于收集废弃玻璃，终于对成品瓶进行质量检验和包装，随后准备分发给零售商。

Initially, used glass bottles are collected from households and businesses, providing the raw material for the recycling cycle. This collected glass then undergoes a sorting and cleaning phase, during which impurities are removed and the glass is separated by colour. Once cleaned, the glass is crushed into small fragments known as cullet, which are subsequently melted at high temperatures in a furnace.首先，从家庭和企业收集使用过的玻璃瓶，为回收循环提供原材料。收集来的玻璃随后进入分拣和清洗阶段，在此阶段中，杂质被去除，玻璃按颜色分类。清洗完毕后，玻璃被粉碎成被称为「碎玻璃」的小碎片，随后在高温炉中熔化。

At the fourth stage, the molten glass is poured into moulds and shaped into new bottles. These freshly formed bottles then pass through a cooling and annealing stage, a controlled process of heating and cooling that strengthens the glass and reduces the risk of breakage. Finally, the bottles undergo quality control and are packaged, ready to be distributed to beverage producers and retailers across the country.在第四阶段，熔融玻璃被倒入模具中并塑造成新瓶子。这些新成型的瓶子随后进入冷却和退火阶段，这是一种受控的加热与冷却过程，能够增强玻璃强度并降低破裂风险。最后，瓶子经过质量控制并完成包装，准备分发给全国各地的饮料生产商和零售商。

搭配词汇

principal stages · 主要阶段raw material · 原材料recycling cycle · 回收循环sorting and cleaning phase · 分拣和清洗阶段high temperatures · 高温molten glass · 熔融玻璃cooling and annealing · 冷却和退火quality control · 质量控制

考官点评

  • TR“Overall, the process begins with the collection of discarded glass and ends with finished bottles that have been quality-checked and packaged, ready for distribution to retailers.” — A single overview sentence frames the entire six-stage process by its start and end points, exactly as a Task 1 process overview should.一个总览句以首尾两端概括了整个六阶段流程，正是Task 1流程题总览句应有的写法。
  • LR“the glass is crushed into small fragments known as cullet” — Introducing the technical term "cullet" shows precise, industry-specific lexical resource rather than a vague paraphrase like "small pieces."引入专业术语 "cullet" 展现了精准的行业专用词汇能力，而非用 "small pieces" 这类模糊的改述。
  • GRA“These freshly formed bottles then pass through a cooling and annealing stage, a controlled process of heating and cooling that strengthens the glass and reduces the risk of breakage.” — An appositive noun phrase followed by a relative clause with two coordinated verbs packs a technical explanation into a single well-controlled sentence.同位语名词短语后接带有两个并列动词的定语从句，将技术性解释精炼地组织进一个结构良好的句子中。
  • CC“At the fourth stage, the molten glass is poured into moulds and shaped into new bottles.” — The explicit sequencing marker "At the fourth stage" keeps the reader oriented within the six-step process, aiding cohesion across paragraphs.明确的顺序标记 "At the fourth stage" 帮助读者在六个步骤中保持方位感，增强了段落间的连贯性。
  • TR“Finally, the bottles undergo quality control and are packaged, ready to be distributed to beverage producers and retailers across the country.” — Correctly closes the report at the diagram's final stage, matching the endpoint promised in the overview sentence.准确地在图表最后一个阶段收尾，与总览句中承诺的终点相符。