The chart below shows the average monthly rent for a one-bedroom apartment in five Vietnamese cities between 2015 and 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

下图展示了2015年至2025年间越南五个城市一居室公寓的平均月租金。请总结信息，选择并报告主要特征，并在相关之处进行比较。

Average Monthly Rent for a One-Bedroom Apartment in Vietnamese Cities (2015-2025)
Average Monthly Rent for a One-Bedroom Apartment in Vietnamese Cities (2015-2025) (million VND)

Data note: figures are illustrative (million VND per month) for this exercise, reflecting the real pattern in which Ho Chi Minh City and Hanoi command Vietnam's highest apartment rents, well above smaller cities such as Hai Phong and Can Tho.数据说明：本练习中的数字（单位：百万越南盾/月）为示例性数据，反映了胡志明市和河内公寓租金在越南居于最高水平、明显高于海防、芹苴等较小城市的真实情况。

6.5 分

This 6.5 answer reports the correct 2015 and 2025 figures for all five cities but never states that Can Tho's rent doubled, unlike the 7.5 answer's precise "saw its rental costs exactly double".这篇6.5分范文准确报告了五个城市2015年和2025年的数据，但从未指出芹苴租金翻倍，而7.5分范文则精确地写出了 "saw its rental costs exactly double"。

The bar chart shows the average monthly rent for a one-bedroom apartment in five cities in Vietnam — Ho Chi Minh City, Hanoi, Da Nang, Hai Phong, and Can Tho — from 2015 to 2025. Overall, rent went up in all five cities during this time, and Ho Chi Minh City always had the highest rent while Can Tho always had the lowest.这张条形图展示了越南五个城市——胡志明市、河内、岘港、海防和芹苴——从2015年到2025年一居室公寓的平均月租金。总体来看，五个城市的租金在此期间都在上涨，其中胡志明市租金始终最高，芹苴租金始终最低。

In 2015, Ho Chi Minh City's rent was VND 6 million per month, and this rose to VND 13 million by 2025. Hanoi's rent was similar, going from VND 5.5 million to VND 12 million. Da Nang's rent also increased, from VND 4 million to VND 8.5 million.2015年，胡志明市的月租金为600万越南盾，到2025年上升至1300万越南盾。河内的情况类似，从550万越南盾上升到1200万越南盾。岘港的租金也有所上涨，从400万越南盾涨到850万越南盾。

Hai Phong and Can Tho had lower rents than the other three cities, but they also went up. Hai Phong's rent grew from VND 3 million to VND 6.5 million, and Can Tho's rent grew from VND 2.5 million, the lowest of all, to VND 5 million by 2025.海防和芹苴的租金低于其他三个城市，但也有所上涨。海防的租金从300万越南盾涨到650万越南盾，芹苴的租金则从最低的250万越南盾涨到2025年的500万越南盾。

搭配词汇

went up in all five cities · 五个城市的租金都在上涨always had the highest rent · 租金始终最高always had the lowest · 始终最低also increased · 也有所上涨the lowest of all · 最低

考官点评

  • TR“Overall, rent went up in all five cities during this time, and Ho Chi Minh City always had the highest rent while Can Tho always had the lowest.” — Covers the shared trend and both extremes of the ranking, satisfying the basic overview requirement, though in simpler wording than "consistently commanding the highest rents".涵盖了共同趋势以及排名的两端，满足了总览句的基本要求，但措辞比 "consistently commanding the highest rents" 简单。
  • LR“Hanoi's rent was similar, going from VND 5.5 million to VND 12 million.” — The adjective "similar" is used correctly to link Hanoi's figures to Ho Chi Minh City's, but the paragraph relies on the repeated verb "rose"/"grew"/"increased" rather than a wider range of near-synonyms.形容词 "similar" 被正确用于将河内的数据与胡志明市联系起来，但该段落主要依赖反复使用的动词 "rose"/"grew"/"increased"，而非更广泛的近义词。
  • CC“Hai Phong and Can Tho had lower rents than the other three cities, but they also went up.” — The connector "but" links the lower-rent pair back to the general upward trend, giving basic cohesion, though the paragraph structure is a simple list rather than a clearly time- or group-signposted sequence.连接词 "but" 将租金较低的两个城市与整体上涨趋势联系起来，提供了基本的连贯性，但段落结构是简单的罗列，而非按时间或分组清晰标示的顺序。
  • GRA“Can Tho's rent grew from VND 2.5 million, the lowest of all, to VND 5 million by 2025.” — A correctly placed non-restrictive appositive ("the lowest of all") adds detail without a separate clause, though the sentence pattern is repeated with only minor variation across the paragraph.正确放置的非限制性同位语（"the lowest of all"）在不使用独立分句的情况下补充了细节，但整段中句式重复，变化不大。
7.0 分

This 7.0 answer notes that Can Tho's rent "more than doubled" and adds comparative phrasing ("closely comparable path", "somewhat slower rate") beyond the 6.5 version, but it lacks the 7.5 answer's exact figure ("exactly double") and its embedded "despite" concession before the main clause.这篇7.0分范文指出芹苴租金 "more than doubled"，并加入了6.5分范文所没有的比较性表达（"closely comparable path"、"somewhat slower rate"），但缺少7.5分范文中精确的数字表达（"exactly double"）以及嵌在主句前的 "despite" 让步结构。

The bar chart illustrates the average monthly rent for a one-bedroom apartment in five Vietnamese cities — Ho Chi Minh City, Hanoi, Da Nang, Hai Phong, and Can Tho — between 2015 and 2025. Overall, rents increased in every city over the decade, with Ho Chi Minh City consistently the most expensive and Can Tho remaining the cheapest throughout the period.这张条形图展示了越南五个城市——胡志明市、河内、岘港、海防和芹苴——从2015年到2025年一居室公寓的平均月租金。总体来看，十年间所有城市的租金都在上涨，胡志明市始终是最昂贵的，而芹苴则在整个时期内保持最便宜。

Ho Chi Minh City's rent rose from VND 6 million in 2015 to VND 13 million in 2025, the largest increase of the five cities. Hanoi followed a closely comparable path, with rent climbing from VND 5.5 million to VND 12 million, while Da Nang's rent grew at a somewhat slower rate, from VND 4 million to VND 8.5 million over the same decade.胡志明市的租金从2015年的600万越南盾上升到2025年的1300万越南盾，是五个城市中涨幅最大的。河内的走势与之高度相似，租金从550万越南盾攀升到1200万越南盾，而岘港的租金则增长得略慢一些，在同一十年间从400万越南盾涨到850万越南盾。

Hai Phong and Can Tho remained considerably cheaper than the other three cities throughout, though both still recorded meaningful growth. Hai Phong's rent increased from VND 3 million to VND 6.5 million, and Can Tho's rent more than doubled, rising from the lowest starting point of VND 2.5 million in 2015 to VND 5 million by 2025.海防和芹苴的租金在整个时期内始终明显低于其他三个城市，但两地也都录得了可观的增长。海防的租金从300万越南盾增至650万越南盾，而芹苴的租金则翻了一倍还多，从2015年最低的250万越南盾涨到2025年的500万越南盾。

搭配词汇

increased in every city · 所有城市的租金都在上涨consistently the most expensive · 始终是最昂贵的remaining the cheapest · 保持最便宜the largest increase · 涨幅最大closely comparable path · 走势高度相似more than doubled · 翻了一倍还多

考官点评

  • TR“Overall, rents increased in every city over the decade, with Ho Chi Minh City consistently the most expensive and Can Tho remaining the cheapest throughout the period.” — An efficient overview naming both extremes of the ranking, functionally equivalent to the 7.5 answer's overview though it does not split the two extremes across two separate sentences for emphasis.简明扼要的总览句，点明了排名的两端，功能上与7.5分范文的总览句相当，但没有像后者那样将两端分别用两句话强调。
  • LR“Da Nang's rent grew at a somewhat slower rate” — A precise qualifying phrase for describing relative pace of change, showing controlled vocabulary, though the answer does not reach for a vivid verb like "commanding" that the 7.5 answer uses.描述相对变化速度时精确的限定表达，展示了良好的词汇掌控力，但该答案未能像7.5分范文那样使用 "commanding" 这类生动的动词。
  • GRA“though both still recorded meaningful growth” — A concessive "though" clause links the lower-rent pair back to the overall upward trend within a single sentence, showing reasonable subordination, though simpler than the 7.5 answer's "despite" phrase embedded before the main clause.让步从句 "though" 在一句话中将租金较低的两个城市与整体上涨趋势联系起来，展示了合理的从属结构，但比7.5分范文中嵌在主句前的 "despite" 短语更简单。
  • CC“Hai Phong and Can Tho remained considerably cheaper than the other three cities throughout, though both still recorded meaningful growth.” — This topic sentence groups the two lower-rent cities and signals the paragraph's focus, playing a similar role to the 7.5 answer's "Meanwhile" sentence but without an explicit contrastive connector.该主题句将两个租金较低的城市归为一组，并明确了段落焦点，与7.5分范文中的 "Meanwhile" 句作用相似，但没有明确的转折连接词。
7.5 分

The 7.5 answer's distinguishing feature is its precision — "saw its rental costs exactly double" — combined with a concessive "despite" clause embedded before the main clause, giving one sentence both exact calculation and grammatical complexity that neither lower band matches.7.5分范文的突出特点在于其精确性——"saw its rental costs exactly double"——并结合了嵌在主句前的让步从句 "despite"，使这一句话同时具备了精确计算和语法复杂度，这是两个较低分数段答案都未能达到的。

The bar chart illustrates the average monthly rent for a one-bedroom apartment in five Vietnamese cities — Ho Chi Minh City, Hanoi, Da Nang, Hai Phong, and Can Tho — over the decade from 2015 to 2025.该柱状图展示了2015年至2025年这十年间越南五个城市——胡志明市、河内、岘港、海防和芹苴——一居室公寓的平均月租金。

Overall, rents rose across all five cities throughout the period, with Ho Chi Minh City consistently commanding the highest rents. Can Tho, by contrast, remained the most affordable of the five cities.总体而言，在此期间五个城市的租金均呈上升趋势，其中胡志明市的租金始终居于最高水平。相比之下，芹苴则始终是这五个城市中最实惠的选择。

Ho Chi Minh City recorded the steepest rise, with average rent climbing from VND 6 million per month in 2015 to VND 13 million by 2025. Hanoi followed a similar pattern, with rents increasing from VND 5.5 million to VND 12 million over the same decade. Da Nang also saw a considerable rise, with rent escalating from VND 4 million to VND 8.5 million by the end of the period.胡志明市的涨幅最为显著，平均租金从2015年的每月600万越南盾攀升至2025年的1300万越南盾。河内呈现出类似的走势，同一时期租金从550万越南盾增长到1200万越南盾。岘港的租金也有相当大的增长，从400万越南盾上升到期末的850万越南盾。

Meanwhile, Hai Phong and Can Tho registered more modest but still significant growth. Hai Phong's average rent increased from VND 3 million to VND 6.5 million, while Can Tho, despite starting at the lowest point of VND 2.5 million in 2015, saw its rental costs exactly double, reaching VND 5 million by 2025.与此同时，海防和芹苴的增长较为温和，但仍然显著。海防的平均租金从300万越南盾增加到650万越南盾，而芹苴尽管在2015年以250万越南盾的最低起点开始，其租金却恰好翻了一倍，到2025年达到500万越南盾。

搭配词汇

average monthly rent · 平均月租金commanding the highest rents · 租金始终居于最高水平the most affordable · 最实惠的recorded the steepest rise · 涨幅最为显著rent escalating · 租金上升registered more modest but still significant growth · 增长较为温和但仍然显著rental costs exactly double · 租金恰好翻了一倍starting at the lowest point · 以最低起点开始

考官点评

  • TR“Overall, rents rose across all five cities throughout the period, with Ho Chi Minh City consistently commanding the highest rents.” — States the shared trend and the top-ranked city in one sentence, an efficient overview for a five-category bar chart.一句话同时说明了共同趋势和排名最高的城市，是应对五类别条形图的高效总览写法。
  • LR“Ho Chi Minh City consistently commanding the highest rents” — The verb "commanding" is a vivid, idiomatic collocation for "having the highest price," more precise than a generic verb like "having."动词 "commanding" 是表达“价格最高”生动且地道的搭配，比 "having" 这类泛用动词更精准。
  • GRA“Can Tho, despite starting at the lowest point of VND 2.5 million in 2015, saw its rental costs exactly double, reaching VND 5 million by 2025” — A concessive "despite" phrase is embedded before the main clause, and "exactly double" is used as an adverb-modified verb complement to add precision and complexity.在主句前嵌入让步状语 "despite"，并用 "exactly double" 作为副词修饰的动词补语，增加了精确度与句法复杂度。
  • CC“Meanwhile, Hai Phong and Can Tho registered more modest but still significant growth.” — The connector "Meanwhile" cohesively shifts attention from the top three cities to the remaining two, structuring the report logically.连接词 "Meanwhile" 自然地将焦点从前三大城市转移到剩余两个城市，使报告的结构合乎逻辑。
  • TR“Da Nang also saw a considerable rise, with rent escalating from VND 4 million to VND 8.5 million by the end of the period.” — Accurately reports the start and end figures for a third city, maintaining consistent, selective detail across the body paragraph.准确报告了第三个城市的起止数值，在段落中保持了一致且有选择性的细节。