The answer states hopes plainly ('I think together we could build something quite good') using a vague intensifier and a single unsubordinated negative sentence, which keeps it clear but linguistically simple.回答平实地表达了期望(‘我觉得我们一起能做出挺不错的成果’),用了一个模糊的程度副词,加上一个没有从属结构的否定句,表达清晰但语言层面简单。
The family member I'd like to work with in the future is my younger sister, Linh. She's studying business in Ho Chi Minh City at the moment.
We haven't really worked together before, apart from small things like helping our parents during Tết, cleaning the house and cooking together. We've never done anything like a real job together.
What I'd like to do with her is open a small online shop, maybe selling clothes or accessories on Shopee. I'm a designer, so I could make the logo, the packaging and the photos look nice, and she's very good with numbers and talking to customers, so she could manage the orders and the money side. I think together we could build something quite good.
The reason I want to work with her is that we trust each other completely, and we both grew up watching our parents run a small business at home, so I think we understand how much effort it takes. Also, we don't get to spend much time together now because she lives so far away, so working on a small project together would be a nice way to stay close, not just talk on Zalo once a week.
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以后我想合作的家人是我妹妹阿玲(Linh)。她现在在胡志明市读商科。
我们以前其实没怎么正式一起做过事,顶多就是过年的时候一起帮爸妈打扫、做饭这种小事,从没真正一起做过什么像样的工作。
我想和她一起做的是开一家小小的网店,可能在Shopee上卖衣服或者小饰品之类的。我是做设计的,logo、包装、照片这些我都能弄得漂漂亮亮的,她数字很好,也很会跟客人打交道,可以负责订单和账目。我觉得我们俩一起应该能做出点不错的东西。
我想和她一起做事,是因为我们彼此完全信任,而且我们俩从小就看着爸妈在家经营一份小生意,所以我觉得我们都懂那有多不容易。另外,现在她住得远,我们平时也没什么机会在一起,如果一起做个小项目,也是个能保持亲近的好方法,总不能一直只在Zalo上一周聊一次。
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- FC“I think together we could build something quite good.” — This sentence states a hope directly, using the vague hedge "quite good" instead of specifying what success might actually look like, and it closes the paragraph without linking forward to the reasons that follow. That flat, unelaborated closing is characteristic of Band 6.5 coherence — clear and understandable, but a Band 7.0 answer would more likely specify what "good" means or connect it explicitly to the skills described just before it.这句话直接表达了一个愿望,用"quite good"这个模糊的缓和说法,而没有具体说明成功究竟会是什么样子,而且它结束这一段时并没有向前衔接到后面出现的理由。这种平淡、未加展开的收尾正是6.5分连贯性的特征——清楚易懂,但7.0分的答案更可能会具体说明"good"指的是什么,或者明确地把它和前面刚描述的技能联系起来。
- LR“quite good” — "Quite good" pairs a common intensifier with one of the most general positive adjectives in English, leaving the actual quality of the imagined business entirely unspecified. A Band 7.0 answer would likely replace this with something more concrete or collocational (e.g. "a solid little side business"), but at Band 6.5 this kind of safe, all-purpose phrase is exactly the plain, low-risk vocabulary the tier is built around, keeping the sentence clear even though it says very little."Quite good"把一个常见的强调词和英语里最笼统的正面形容词之一配对使用,让这个想象中的生意到底质量如何完全没有说清楚。7.0分的答案很可能会用更具体或更具搭配感的表达来替换(例如"a solid little side business"),但在6.5分这一档,这种稳妥、万能的说法正是这个分段所依赖的那种朴实、低风险的词汇,即便说得很少,也能让句子保持清晰。
- GRA“We've never done anything like a real job together.” — The sentence is a single negative statement with no subordinate clause attached — no "because," no "even though," nothing explaining or qualifying the claim. A Band 7.0 answer might attach a reason or consequence here (e.g. "because we've always lived in different cities"), but on its own this unembellished negative sentence demonstrates the limited structural range that defines Band 6.5 grammar.这句话是一个单独的否定陈述句,没有附加任何从句——没有"because",没有"even though",没有任何解释或限定这个论断的内容。7.0分的答案可能会在这里附上一个理由或后果(比如"因为我们一直住在不同的城市"),但就其本身而言,这个未加修饰的否定句展现出的正是6.5分语法所具有的那种有限的结构广度。